Can I suggest some alternate text for the beginning? Writing alternate crawls is an odd Star Wars hobby of mine!

NEW OPENING CRAWL:

War is spreading across the galaxy.

New battlefields are rapidly emerging as the armies of the Republic and Separatists fight for control.

Taking a direct role in this conflict, Senator BAIL ORGANA has began providing relief and supplies to numerous clone squadrons on the front lines.

Anakin Skywalker has achieved the rank of JEDI KNIGHT. In honor of this achievement, his master Obi-Wan Kenobi has put in a request for Anakin to teach his skills to a new padawan.

Meanwhile, the pair have tracked Count Dooku’s vicious Sith assassin, ASAJJ VENTRESS, to the planet of Christophsis.
But Ventress is far more cunning than she appears…