The nightmare looks AWESOME. The only thing I would be against is the overlaying of Anakin squirming in bed. We should see what he sees in the dream, and then CUT to the close up of his eyes snapping open. This would fit-in with the way the dreams were done in RotS.
The shot of the guard in the Naboo ship seems squeezed horizontally. Maybe it's a after effect of you cropping it from full screen, and it'll looks fine in motion.
The platform shot looks fine; I guess you just wanted a closer view of the explosion.
The de-saturated shot of Coruscant is EXCELLENT. It looks REAL!!! And although I have no idea of your reason for flipping the shot, it looks even better that way!
The binary sunest looks very washed out and faded, but I assume this is to match the new color scheme of the scene and not be an exact copy of the one from ANH.
Excellent work on the balcony. Before everything looked too blue, as you noted. My only concern with these shots is that their faces seem to be a bit grainy. Of course this maybe nothing and it might look fine in motion.
It's so great to finally see our ideas being realized! Keep up the good work, you're a real Trooper, man. (Ok, that was lame. Sorry.)