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Post #1397349

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RogueLeader
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Dom's (Possibly) Useful TROS Edit (WIP)
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Date created
28-Dec-2020, 4:56 AM

DominicCobb said:

Actually one other one, back to Luke, during his flashback VO, saying “Leia sensed the birth of her son.”

Some variations on the Leia line:

Leia told me that she sensed she would have a son…

Leia told me that she was to have a son…

Leia sensed that she would have her son… at the end of her Jedi training.

Leia told me that she had sensed her death at the end of her Jedi path.

Leia told me that she had sensed death at the end of her Jedi path.

It was the last night of her training. Leia told me that she had sensed the death of her son at the end of her Jedi path… Because of Palpatine… She surrendered her saber to me and said that one day it would be picked up again, by someone who would finish her journey.

It was the last night of her training. Leia told me that she had sensed that she was at the end of her Jedi path. She surrendered her saber to me and said that one day it would be picked up again, by someone who would finish her journey.

Leia told me that she was at the end of her Jedi path.

Leia had sensed that she was at the end of her Jedi path.

EDIT:
Remove the first “It was the last night of her training” line.

Leia told me that sensed that she would have her son at the end of her training. She surrendered her saber to me and said that one day she would finish her Jedi path.