I’m going over “Leia saw it too” in my head. Just might work. I love that you always find these simple solutions, I had a few in my head that were really complicated.

I’m digging the other lines. Not sure where “in” comes from but maybe I’m overlooking something obvious. Seems like it could be choppy but I guess the only way to know will by to try it out. Sometimes it works, sometimes not. That’s why I haven’t done the Finn/Jannah dialogue change, because I can’t source a good “fight” from him that matches “we all need to.”