Ok, here’s an updated pass at the Coruscant addition! It’s the same link as before:

https://vimeo.com/494722697
pw: fanedit
(The new FX shots are at :06, 1:24, and 1:26)

For the first shot, I enlarged and moved the planet more prominently into the frame, and I was able to extend the shot by a full 24 frames to give it more time to register (Hal you will need to extend the audio like you said).

For the last shot, I made a few refinements. First, I made the rings on the left less circular and more oval. Then, I was actually able to get a good track using Mocha, which made the window frames considerably more stable, and all of the roto should be greatly improved. It might not be quite perfect, but I scrutinized those edges as best I could and this may be about as good as I can get it!