V4 was my preference, and yes, I accidentally rendered it without tweaking the Clone Wars logo, which I agree should end up at max (well, hit the safety zones).

I’ll see if I can find a slightly wider font.

I do like the ellipsis. I liked that in my last line of my v1. It feels a bit pulpy and cheeky, but I think that’s OK for Star Wars? Interested in folks’ feelings on that.

Currently, in terms of lines, I went with
1,2,2. : 2,2,1.
With the very first being “time period within the clone wars”, and the very last being “hint at what’s to come”. Though I don’t know if that last one needs to strictly be 1 line.