I’m probably a little late on suggestions, but here’s some thoughts! On my first watch I felt the intro music was a little too mellow. Music that falls tonally somewhere between the standard Clone Wars intro music and what you used in the demo clip would feel a bit better in my eyes (or ears).

The sequence of intro text, Clone Wars title, then episode title works well, but I would be interested to see how different ordering feels, especially if you are doing a cold open format. The outro music and credits with the concept art is perfect. I wouldn’t change that at all. Great job!