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Post #1395890

Author
DominicCobb
Parent topic
Dom's (Possibly) Useful TROS Edit (WIP)
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Date created
23-Dec-2020, 12:06 AM

Hal 9000 said:

What was changed for the space battle? I skimmed through and didn’t notice anything different. Which actually makes me happy.

In the original film, it goes like this:

  • Rey parks her X-wing, walks into the pyramid
  • Resistance goes through nebula and arrives on Exegol, Star Destroyers fire on them, Poe says “don’t give up, help is coming,” Finn gets a visual on the tower
  • Cut to Rey walking through the lobby of Palpatine’s mansion, sees the clone chamber, walks down the rock hallway
  • Cut to the fighters zooming downward and TIE fighters deploying, stays with them all the way through to the assualt on the Star Destroyer, ending with Finn cheering on BB-8 and saying “tower’s up ahead”
  • Cut to Rey approaching the throne

I cut it like this:

  • Rey parks her X-wing, walks into the pyramid
  • Continue with Rey walking through the lobby of Palpatine’s mansion, sees the clone chamber, walks down the rock hallway
  • Resistance goes through nebula and arrives on Exegol, Star Destroyers fire on them, music comes in, Poe says “don’t give up, help is coming,” Finn gets a visual on the tower
  • Continue with the fighters zooming downward and TIE fighters deploying, stays with them all the way through to the assualt on the Star Destroyer, ending with Finn cheering on BB-8 and saying “tower’s up ahead”
  • Cut to Rey approaching the throne