Just finished an updated version (V2), having audited the whole edit based on a great video about “showing, not telling.”
I specifically addressed the points mentioned in the video about TLJ, then audited the rest of the edit for more examples, shaving off an additional 13 minutes of needless exposition. Also had a good list of notes from reddit feedback that I have been meaning to review and consider. (a word here, a frame there)
Available now!