logo Sign In

Post #1391970

Author
Lifeincontext
Parent topic
The Force Awakens - 'The End' Edition (WIP)
Link to post in topic
https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1391970/action/topic#1391970
Date created
8-Dec-2020, 7:47 PM

adobewan said:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UBg2yW33ABIukMngZdr3tJD5b0knCaEv/view?usp=sharing

Here’s an updated link including the Yoda scene. This version omits the R2 scene as one possibility. I’ll include a version with that scene shortly. I think this works really well! I may still have to trim some of the dialogue but once I get the outline of the film looking right I’ll start focusing on editing the audio

Great job! I love the scene reordering. The pacing is beautiful for most of it. That last montage feels off though. I would make the cuts tighter and keep the original rhythm of her words. But the concept is lovely. Well done.