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Post #139171

Author
ronlaw
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Star Wars: Episode I - The Phantom Menace Story Rewrite (deleted information)
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Date created
17-Sep-2005, 1:21 PM
Hey, that is quite cool! I really liked the improved tie-in to the OT, and the training of Anakin was great. I like skipping the young Anakin.

However I think you have FAR too much material for one film. Don't they talk about 3 acts? In that case you've got twice as much as you need. In general I would not be introducing new characters later in the story either, except perhaps you could get away with the Sith as mysterious characters to be fleshed out later.