Remove Palpatine’s knowledge of the dyad and desire to use it for evil from the start of the movie.

Instead, he just tells Kylo to kill Rey. Don’t address the fact that you’ve now cut the explanation of how Kylo knew about the dyad. When Rey meets Palpatine, have him explain/imply he actually didn’t really want her dead, but that he actually wants to use her as a vessel, and that this only works because of their close genetic relationship - thus making it clear that, had Kylo gone ahead with killing Rey, Palpatine would have remained stuck in his decaying body (and have really played himself).

Explain in the Visual Dictionary that Snoke did know about the dyad, but don’t worry too much about why he didn’t tell Palpatine about it.

This will help… streamline the plot? I think? I’m not really sure why someone would make an edit like that.