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Post #1390390

Author
EddieDean
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
2-Dec-2020, 4:36 PM

OK, that’s the full series run through and considered whilst holding this project’s goals in mind. My key takeways:

  • Good God, when the Clone Wars is good, it’s excellent
  • Good God, when the Clone Wars is bad, it’s horrendous
  • However there is, definitely, a best path through it which highlights all the best and massively minimises the bad, whilst missing nothing important. Which means, of course, that there’s huge value in a quality focused cut.
  • Less is more. Many of the episodes are overly padded, especially when the show settled into four-episode arcs, and they’re paced around 22 minutes times four, not 88 minutes. Most should end up punchier in the 45-60 minute range.
  • Ahsoka is absolutely the heart, with incredible character development, and a range of good relationships.
  • Rex also has great development - though most of his episodes are in clone heavy arcs, not all of which are consistently great.
  • Quality is all over, though - let the other characters shine too, when they get a really good episode.
  • Almost all separatist villains lose their malice through serial failiure, and almost all separatist designs are visually uninteresting.

So here’s the next steps:

  • Take a little break. I’ve not done anything else with my free time since I made the original post.
  • Read over this thread and my other notes all myself again, to refresh. (Now is a great time for anyone who’s interested to feel free to think through the notes too, and/or offer up any thoughts to help frame the next stages.)
  • Review the now-polished list of episodes. Create an initial test chronology - pacing Maul equally, then Mandalore and Ahsoka’s development throughout, then best quality episodes.
  • Probably do a few focused watches to challenge that. I don’t really need to question the Mauldalore stuff because that’s all staying and it has its order, but I’d like to focus on Ahsoka’s development and make sure I have a solid growth for her that focuses on all her best episodes in the right order. I’d also like to consider Rex/Clones a bit more closely. I need to work out quite how much Rex is a core character, and if so, which arcs and relationships best support his development. Finally, plug in the other bests, and do a little checking of other episodes to make sure they’re worthy or not.
  • I’ll also use this time to pull together and sort some of the additional assets I’ll need for credits.
  • Then, get to cutting. I might break from the second rewatch to get at least a pilot episode out to you guys first, so we can discuss that and I can take your refinement notes as I watch. So it’ll be pilot episode first (Cloak/Lair), then onto the priority ones in chronological order. I’ll try to set myself up an editing pipeline where I can churn out the simple aggregate+polish episodes while I’m working on the more technical edits of those that need closer attention.
  • Once I’m confident I can maintain the momentum, I’ll advertise the weekly watch and start releasing episodes.