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Post #1389881

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EddieDean
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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30-Nov-2020, 4:32 PM

S06E10 - The Lost One (First episode of The Yoda Arc) - Important - Quality Cut

First episode is separate from the others. It’s quite interesting, and while low on action, but by this point in the story I think we’re pretty invested in an investigation of the origins of the clones.

It adds an interesting wrinkle that you don’t have otherwise- the information that the Jedi became aware that the Sith created the clone army, and that they opted to keep it a secret and continue the war anyway.

This needs to come late, but I might give it an episode to breathe before dropping straight into the next one.

S06E11-13 - The remainder of the Yoda Arc - Important - Quality Cut

This one’s mostly fantastic, and contains a lot of revelation. As with Mortis, I think it’s a little hamfisted and demistifying, though I think this one will be far easier to cut around.

I’d like to remove there being a literal planet of the force where (some?) life began, and the five literal life-after-death spirits, but the rest can all work if that planet is merely a vision, and I use the occasional voice over from the spirits.

Instead it’ll run like this:

  • Yoda hears from Qui-Gon and opts to go into the deep meditation, where Qui-Gon directs him to Dagobah
  • Yoda enters the force cave on Dagobah and communes with Qui-Gon
  • First vision: The false peace of the temple, where Dooku is the betrayer
  • Second vision: The future deaths of the Jedi
  • Third “vision”: Yoda on the force planet, cut down to just the fight against his fear.
  • Voice over directing him to Moraband, which I think there’s a good chance I can change to Korriban with some audio editing. (The planet is canonically Korriban, George just wanted to use another name for this episode.)
  • Yoda awakens on Dagobah and flies to Korriban
  • Sidious notices “an opportunity”, and calls Dooku to help with the ritual
  • Yoda encounters the Sith snakes, Sith acolytes, Bane spirit, and then the Sifo-Dyas illusion which draws him into the trap
  • Spirit fight with Sidious, preserving all the metaphors and hints
  • As Yoda wakes, stay on a white screen, picking any of the remaining valuable quotes, ending with “there is another… Skywalker.”
  • Yoda denies his experiences to the council. “No longer certain that win a war, one can…”, and we play out the rest as in the episode.

You still get all the meat, we just preserve more mysticism.