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Post #1388894

Author
szopman
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
27-Nov-2020, 4:01 AM

I think its a great idea to use the smudgers I movie. Just one thought, In my opinion you should trim a lot the first act.
well, If I were u Id cut the whole Anakin mission to arrive on Christophis. It ruins the pacing and its Just the most boring part I think 😀
Then, there is the first part of the clone Troopers story, on kamino, which should be drasticaly trimmed. It s Just too cartoonish for me. And pacing wise, it would be better to reduce it drasticaly.

What do you think about that?