Here was the edit I did and and it shows a slightly different scene order…

Just thinking to include the informant would it make more sense on the line “found a ship that might suit us” it cut’s to Han kissing the Girl then back to the informant that leaves the bar and then as he walks we wipe on him to outside?

but that is pretty much all the whole thing I have to be honest I only realised the dubbed line over the Greedo shot the other day and it’s not in the edit I did because I did not realise it at the time…

the only other thing I notice is Lukes muffled line at the bar ordering a drink could be mild censorship too.

Thats all and hope it helps you can use the Walrus decap shot if it helps your video project too and good luck with it 😃