That could all work! Though it would be difficult.
Some of the Lor San Tekka stuff could be established even further in the crawl, to help establish this as the main plot and do some of the lifting rather than dialogue replacement.
That could all work! Though it would be difficult.
Some of the Lor San Tekka stuff could be established even further in the crawl, to help establish this as the main plot and do some of the lifting rather than dialogue replacement.