I watched that video about his edit and it sounded good… He made alot of good observations ad gave good reasons for why and how he changed the structure.
But and this is a small but he was essentially treating it as that it had to be 2 hours or there abouts which is fine constraits are good for creativity but it would also be interesting to look at what he loped off also as he does not regard any down side to cuttig anythig.
I thought it sounded well thought out though…