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Post #1384478

Author
Kanemedhurst
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Star Wars: The Clone Wars I-VI (Kane's Edits) - OFFLINE
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Date created
6-Nov-2020, 8:28 AM

I think the text crawl is something I’m having the most trouble with. I’m terrible at wording things. But here’s what I’ve got down at the moment:

Episode I:
A Galaxy Divided! More systems have alligned with the Seperatists in their war against the Republic.
Crime Lord Jabba The Hutt also seeks help as his son has been kidnapped by a rival band of pirates.
Can the Jedi bring peace to these corrupt Separatist planets and to the Hutt Clan?

Episode II:
Seperatist Leader Poggle The Lesser has returned to Geonosis to counteract its Republic control.
Using the once-captured planet, he creates terrifying new droid factories to fight the Jedi’s Clone Army.
Can the Republic recapture Geonosis and shut down Poggle’s factories once and for all?

Episode III:
Showdown! Anakin Skywalker and Obi Wan Kenobi have clashed with Asajj Ventress in the Sullust system.
However, this battle will not go how Count Dooku’s prized assassin had planned it.
What lies in the future for Ventress, as she leads her ships into this galactic dogfight?

Episode IV:
After another clash with Obi Wan Kenobi, Darth Maul and Savage Opress were left for dead and stranded in space.
Heavily wounded, they are now in the care of Death Watch, an exiled group on Mandalore led by Pre Visla.
Why does this feared organization share a similar hatred for the Jedi and Obi Wan Kenobi?

Episode V:
Years have passed since Padawan Ahsoka Tano was appointed to Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker for training.
Her skills far surpass those of her age and sometimes rival those of her master.
However, a plot is looming in the Underworld. What could it be? How will it change Ahsoka’s life forever?

Episode VI (Set after ROTS):
Before the rise of the Empire, the Republic struggled to end the fabled Clone War.
Jedi Generals were dispatched beyond the core worlds to fight for the Republic’s survival.
Commander Cody and the 212th were trapped on Yerbana, moments before the historic attack on Coruscant…

As you can guess, Each line is each ‘page’ in the crawl, theres enough time in the opening to make the crawl a tad long but I feel I just need some help tweaking a few lines.

Also after a few test renders. These babys wont take long. I’m just interested on knowing what file sizes suit people. In the test renders the movies where coming out from 10-12Gb. I’m wondering if people want them down to about 5-7Gb?