Ah, I thought you meant you tweaked the workprint transition. As it is, I think it works well as Dominic delivered.
I can certainly just remove the one instance of “Traitor!” I’ll watch the scene again and see how it strikes me.
Ah, I thought you meant you tweaked the workprint transition. As it is, I think it works well as Dominic delivered.
I can certainly just remove the one instance of “Traitor!” I’ll watch the scene again and see how it strikes me.