Watched it. It was pretty good overall, certainly replacing everything we got so far in the visual department. Builds, lighting, color, added VFX, all stellar.
I like the limited inclusion of the narration but they very last one does not work. “I don’t know why he saved my life…” in the corridor does not work, ruining the tension of the scene while seemingly belonging to the one before. If this is included, it should be on the roof. Maybe just re-use some of the shoots of Ford sitting there, breathless, while it plays.
That Pris’ dossier is missing is kind of a shame, since we loose the peversity of her being a pleasure model that way. Removing Zhora is fine. Cannot figure out how to do both at the same time though myself…
Oh yeah, and Subtitles would be cool 😃
Videmaster, thanks for watching and the feedback! I did miss the pleasure model cut, played with keeping it in as V.O. but ultimately decided otherwise. I wanted to reduce the importance of the dossiers, and not have three full dossiers and just none for Zhora. I guess in my future edits, I’ll start off with subtitles in my project. That way it’s easy to just edit them (cut, move) along with the scenes.