I also just finished it up. I was actually really impressed at how you were able to make the mudhorn scene fit. In terms of making sure this essential scene was there it was a clever way of doing it (in fact figuring out how to do that was half the reason I never bothered making my own edit of this).
Overall the narrative is solid. You hit all the key points and we get all the essential character development. It’s got me pretty pumped for season 2!