One thing you should do it to remove all the “oops” and “oh oh” from Anakin. That makes him feel more adult and the action more believable.
You can even make him go into the space battle willingly. Actually makes more sense if he just decides to go, it’s more in character.
You’ll be happy to know that I’m doing both with this edit (of course, I still have to educate myself on how to remove dialogue and sound effects from Resolve, but that shouldn’t be too much of a problem, since the link is easy to find in Resolve. Even then, I’ve been able to kill off a lot of whoops and yippees just from cutting them).