One thing you should do it to remove all the “oops” and “oh oh” from Anakin. That makes him feel more adult and the action more believable.
You can even make him go into the space battle willingly. Actually makes more sense if he just decides to go, it’s more in character.
Post #1377159
- Author
- 4throck
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- Star Wars Episode I: The Rise of Naboo (v3.5 released)
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- Date created
- 25-Sep-2020, 5:56 AM