Okay, Ziggy, the logic and pacing work well. Makes sense to see the heroes decide where to go and take off before hearing Kylo say he knows their destination.

Your mock-up involves reusing a shot from earlier of Poe messing with switches. It’d either have to be reused or cut from the earlier scene. I have replaced my proxy ProRes source file with the full size, making further editing painfully slow and tedious, so I wasn’t able to do much at all tonight.

Even as I type, I had to skim through the film to remind myself that the Kylo-Palpatine conversation had been moved from heading to Endor. And it introduced a continuity error I don’t believe anyone picked up on until you did.

Perhaps the simplest fix would be to replace or remove the line, “I know where she’s going.”