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Post #1376077

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idir_hh
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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Date created
19-Sep-2020, 2:41 PM

NeverarGreat said:

Maybe after the pain has been blunted by time…maybe. 😉

Anyway, on this project I’ve gone back to an earlier concept for the Starkiller Infiltration. The previous iterations all felt too choppy and stitched together, so I’ve consolidated the Mind Trick scenes back into one. The workprint version of the Kylo Falcon scene came after the X-wing attack, which felt strange because it pulled focus away from that action for too long. Besides, it was originally supposed to take place before the fighter attack. Here I’ve returned it to a previous spot after Rey avoids the guards. With the addition of extra dialogue and that establishing shot, I think it works a bit better.

https://vimeo.com/459628132

Password: fanedit

Amazing, all of it.

Only think to nitpick is that the smash cut from Kylo inside the falcon to appearing outside the falcon feels a little abrupt.