I just had the random urge to check the threads tonight, and seeing a new clip from you was a very pleasant surprise!

I think taking a break from working on this has helped a lot. This is by far the best iteration you’ve done so far. Each scene flows nicely into the other, and I can’t even notice the seams of the cuts. And the way you connect each consecutive scene makes it arguably an improvement over the theatrical. As far as the scene order goes I have nothing to add.

Also, you might’ve done this in a previous version, but did you have the lights turning on in the hangar, prompting Rey to hide? That addition just makes the logic of everything make so much damn sense, that it’s kind of unbelievable it’s missing from the original. Really like the new stormtrooper chatter too.