Yes, “you have his power” is tricky, I think if possible I’d like to change it to “you’ll have his power.” Foreshadowing the transference but also not necessarily giving it away, since in this context it could also mean his power as in his throne and his command.
Post #1375918
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- DominicCobb
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- REY NOBODY - A Collaborative Thread
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- Date created
- 18-Sep-2020, 2:00 PM