Yes! Our conversations inspired me to try to approach it with more simplicity than I was before.

I’m glad to hear that! I love a lot of the choices you’ve made so far with yours, so I’d be excited to see you play around with it more. I’m planning to work on the Force bond duel next week, so maybe that’ll inspire more conversation. I think the main difference of my approach is that I’m removing any reference to Rey’s parents or Palpatine wanting to find/kill her as a child. I’m going to try and keep the scene length/pacing the same, but I want to shift Rey’s emotional tether from what happened to her parents in the past, to what will happen to her friends in the future. We’ll see how that turns out.