As before i´ll mention technical aspects of your edit, since content wise it is and should be your own thing.
Your additions and corrections for episode I are working so far.
Episode II - Corruption of Mandalore
- Crawl --> maybe without the exclamation mark. SW never used this kind of thing, but if you want to keep it, just do so
Revenge of the Sith’s crawl begins with “War!” and The Rise of Skywalker begins with “The dead speak!”, so personally I think the exclamation point works fine. This crawl is the also the only time I used an exclamation point in all six crawls, so it’s low usage should fit pretty well with traditional Star Wars punctuation.
- Transitions:
–> 0:22:49 - too abrupt
–> 1:04:30 - perhaps use an audio fade out/fade in to the next scene
–> 1:46:25 - hard abrupt cut
–> 1:48:12, 1:48:12 - same here
–> 1:49:18 - use a audio fade out or fade in
–> 1:50:47, 1:53:44, 1:57:14, 1:57:54 - same here
Thanks for letting me know about these faulty transitions. I’m not really planning on doing any more editing for a while, because I got kind of burnt out after spending a lot of time making these. So the transitions probably won’t be fixed for a while.
All of the episodes besides Episode I (updated) and Episode VI have abrupt cuts, but I made edits 2-4 before I received any feedback on my transitions so I didn’t know the best way to edit them. I’ve edited 1 & 6 since I received feedback, so those are edited better.