This edit seems really interesting. I haven’t gotten around to watching it yet, but I hope I will soon.
What I’m worried about, though, is the removal of the Tatooine episode. From what I’ve heard, it seems like the events of that episode will play a key role in the plot of season 2, so I’m worried that cutting that episode will create contradictions with the next season.
Other than that, great job. I’m looking forward to seeing it.