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Post #1372651

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Darth_Zounds
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Revenge of the Sith: Blue Harvest Cut (Released)
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Date created
2-Sep-2020, 6:16 PM

JKMaxx said:
I find that RotS was much louder than the TCW footage so the audio transitions were jarring as well.

A friend of mine told me the opposite, so I guess I must have compensated too much for that. I’ll see what I can do.

As for the hard cuts as opposed to wipes, I simply felt that it helped to truly emphasize that both Anakin and Ahsoka’s journeys are happening more or less simultaneously.

Hm. Maybe I could still try more wipes in some places.

JKMaxx said:
I also think the crawl text might need revising.

What might you recommend for the crawl text?

JKMaxx said:
the post-credits Vader scene could probably be bumped up closer to the end of the credits; a minute between is quite a long time.

I see.

In a fan edit of AOTC, I did something I think that you’re suggesting: Shortly after the credits started, I showed a quick intro of Ahsoka Tano, which ended right when Anakin was baffled about getting an apprentice. Maybe I can do something similar, albeit with a somber tone.

JKMaxx said:

This is a really strong start and I think you have something great on your hands!

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that.

Honestly, I’ve been editing and re-editing this off and on for the past three months, almost since the Corona virus pandemic started.

You can almost say I’m weary of this by now, yet I also enjoy appreciating this beautiful tragedy more and more.

Maybe with your critiques, I can continue to make this even better!