My thoughts on the crawls:
„Path of Padawan“:
- „…over the past few weeks…“ I think something like „over recent times“ or „in the recent past“ would fit better for Star Wars atmosphere.
„Children of Dathomir“:
- why „Dark Side“ in capital letters? In my opinion it is unnecessary since we already knew who Asajj is.
- „…has concocted…“ It is a nice word, but not very common, „…has forged…“ is the better choice in my opinion
„An untamed evil“
- don’t recall surely but isn’t it the first time we will see maul after episode I? If so you should leave out Mauls Name, just end it with „his lost brother…“
„Fate of the Republic“
- unbekwonst? uncommon, distracts from reading further (at least for myself as non native english reader/speaker), perhaps „Without the knowledge of the republic…“ or completely rephrase it.
Other than that, I’m impressed. In my point of view good choice of the right amount of context for the individual episodes.
Looking forward to your edit.
What do you intend to use as a source and which quality? Especially for the audio.