Hmm. I don’t really see or hear how that helps. I really don’t have any issue with what’s there, and that just sounds like a good transition with something discordant over top. Sorry, but I don’t think it’s an improvement, at least not to my ears.

Totally unrelated, but I’m taking this waiting period to start syncing English subtitles to my modified ‘extended editions’ of Kerr’s still (!) unreleased Lord of the Rings edits. Turns out with small children around we watch everything with subtitles! So, that needs to be done before I “retire.”