Burbin, you’re absolutely right. Thanks! I’ll see about one of the other two line options for that.
I know you said you didn’t want to cut and mix the KoR dialogue, but I do feel “Palpatine wants the girl alive. Kill the rest” was the strongest line of the three options, and maybe you could consider taking “Kylo Ren” from “Kylo Ren’s little pet is close” or another unused line to replace “Palpatine”, making it “Kylo Ren wants the girl alive. Kill the rest”.