Poppa saying “Palpatine wants the girl alive” is a nice line he did 3 takes I think we could splice better parts together for some of these lines, I think it would be better as “Palpatine wants the girl alive” - “I can feel her presence” https://youtu.be/4dTRvsB9z4U
Knight of ren saying “what, thats not fair” seemed a bit strange and out of place to be honest.
“What, how” works best. https://youtu.be/n3onCUE9fog