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Post #1370164

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Cinefy
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
19-Aug-2020, 11:12 PM

Hal 9000 said:

Finn’s line from the briefing doesn’t work when juxtaposed with his line in the landing scene. The walking on leaves foley works okay, but it’s practically subliminal in order to blend in right. It doesn’t hurt by being there, but it only makes it better to know it’s there, as it can’t jump out at you.

I played with the Palpatine message, but I think it’s very effective to have the message end in static as Poe looks down and hearing everyone react audibly, moreso than any particular contents of the speech. So, I think what is in the workprint is as good as that’s going to get.

I think “The work of generations is complete” would be nice to have.
DOTF should end when Rey hits ground, doesn’t flow well after in my opinion thats how I originally intended it anyway