I really don’t want to beat a dead horse here, but I made this mockup of the rey/poe argument scene if anyone is interested in checking out. I kept one reference of lightspeed skipping but the rest of the lightspeed part of the argument is gone. My goal was to keep the interaction between rey and finn while trying to not make too much of a jarring cut around the lightspeed skipping references.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NPEdp_y2624WF-G2ZVz8VBOpYh4ahREZ/view?usp=sharing