I don’t think the Falcon even punches through the ice wall at hyperspeed. To my eyes it looks like it breaks through the wall, then accelerates to light speed after. Lightspeed skipping sounds to me like it’s describing some kind of specific maneuver that doesn’t map cleanly onto anything we see the Falcon do in the remaining chase sequence. Having the reference in there is going to remind me of the cut sequence every time I watch the film.
+1 They clearly jump to lightspeed AFTER they break through the ice, nothing in that moment indicates any special maneuver beyond “I hope the Falcon can break through this ice”.
And I think “you blew both sub-alternators?” is enough techno babble for that scene, “lightspeed skipping” sounds like something bigger than random babble, and it’s jarring to drop that in with no further reference. Removing any reference works much better and that tiny interaction between Rey & Finn is not worth it.