Thank you for your feedback, I’ll defiantly consider it when I make the third draft.
Writing that third draft?
Post #1368850
- Author
- Hadrian sunrider
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- STAR WARS Episode IX: Duel of the Fates Re-Write 2nd Draft
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- Date created
- 14-Aug-2020, 2:27 AM