I think 0:11 to 0:14 is unnecessary. The camera movement is to fast, it doesn’t match the rest of the film
Also 0:23,5 to 0:28 (starting to show Vader with ignited lightsaber and end with the „aerial“ shot). Perhaps like 0:05,5 - 0:11 then cut to OT approaching Vader (0:30). Problem would be to incorporate the line „I’ve been waiting for you obi-wan…“.
Do you plan to „enhance“ the visuals to match with OT?