Work has restarted on this!
Please, tell me what you think of the chapters, and what you’d change.
I’m thinking about replacing the first chapter with the Battle of Hoth. It establishes the real enemy, while Jabba feels like a digression.
The final chapter in Volume 1 will feature Ben and Vader duel, and probably the Battle of Yavin.
The chapters and the structure looks very good for me. I like the Jabba Scene but the battle of Hoth is maybe a better idea. You can show introduce the empire with a Pulp Fiction like text and Vader then he enter the rebell base. Then you introduce Leia, you will use footage from ANH as flashbacks? Thats cool. In the Obi Wan chapter should you use footage from the Prequels i think. Funny/cool scenes with Obi Wan would be awsesome.