Work has restarted on this!
Please, tell me what you think of the chapters, and what you’d change.
I’m thinking about replacing the first chapter with the Battle of Hoth. It establishes the real enemy, while Jabba feels like a digression.
The final chapter in Volume 1 will feature Ben and Vader duel, and probably the Battle of Yavin.
Post #1367930
- Author
- IlFanEditore
- Parent topic
- KILL SHEEV - A Tarantino-ish Original Trilogy Edit (a WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1367930/action/topic#1367930
- Date created
- 9-Aug-2020, 3:55 PM