I moved all of this victory montage after the Resistance victory scene on Ajan Kloss. That way it can be The Resistance and their new fleet aiding in taking down the First/Final Order.
Hal, are you gonna do this? It makes more sense than “suddenly, unpopulated Jakku took down a Star Destroyer”
I feel it doesn’t flow as well if you move it after the Ajan Kloss celebration, especially given the musical cues and Finn’s line of “people are rising up all over the galaxy”.
I changed the music around a little bit anyway, and cut Finn’s line (also cut him seeing Rey leave, because that’s just odd to me with the way they react when they meet at the celebration).
Just a thought though.