I think it would flow better if Coruscant and Naboo were switched. Having two sunsets back to back subconsciously implies close proximity of the planets (something that’s rife in the sequel trilogy). Also, if you switch them, we go from the bright centre of the universe to Jakku (nowhere) reminiscent of Luke’s comment in ANH.
Post #1367331
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- TK42-WAN
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- 6-Aug-2020, 4:11 AM