Would you consider cutting Poe’s line “Did we ever find his volume control?”. I think 3PO’s new line about an R2 unit works better on it’s own and we’d have one less moment of Poe treating 3PO like trash (specially odd after he just sacrificed himself). Just cut to Finn & Jannah before Poe starts talking.
Honestly it’s bizarre how Poe treats 3PO & D-O compared to his relation to BB-8 in the previous films.
I can see how it plays; I agree in principle.