I wasn’t happy with the opening crawl, so I’ve been playing around with it. I’ve settled on this. Any comments?
Following the Battle of Endor the NEW REPUBLIC has restored peace to the core systems, but a power vacuum has plunged the outer rim into chaos.
IMPERIAL REMNANTS have formed in the shadows. They have taken control of distant worlds as they search for a mysterious asset that could return them to power.
Commissioned by the Bounty Hunter Guild and given only the asset’s age and the promise of a vast reward, a lone MANDALORIAN approaches its last known location…
I would suggest maybe changing “imperial remnants have formed in the shadows” to either linger in the shadows or dwell in the shadows… I think it sounds a little more sinister & menacing