Here is a real quick mock-up of Kylo saying “you’re a Palpatine” instead of you’re his granddaughter. Super rough as I’m not good with audio but this is atleast how it would flow
https://vimeo.com/440182384
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And here is the other way that was mentioned, which has it end after Kylo says “You have his power” I feel like there would need to be more silence before we show Rey’s shocked reaction though because it seems abrupt to have the music swell that quickly after the “reveal”
https://vimeo.com/440184299
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Edit: I don’t know if either of these sounds any better but it’s probably okay how workprint 4 has it