Just watched the workprint. Liked the flashbacks, the “ok!” Edit, Loved the “I will be your protocol Droid” and the “Kill me now” joke.
The overall feel and pacing is so much better.

Things that stood out.

Surprised you kept the Rey handing over of Saber continuety issue in.

Finn saying “look sharp” to R2 seems the same as Leia saying “take that expression off your face” to 3PO in TLJ.

Weird audio issue from group falcon scene to vaders mask.

Soundtrack clash coming out of above scene.

Desert chase feels a little cold in tone.

Did you add the trooper saying “move animal” to Chewie?

Are you adding KoR voices?

A huge improvement on your previous versions. Nice work everyone!