The crawl is good, I’d say maybe capitalize stuff like “First Order” and “Resistance.” Exegol looks much better, which also makes the purple lightsaber not as jarring. But some of the other shots, particularly the rebel base, are very red. Personally, I would add more/different music to the lightsaber fight on the Deathstar, as the duel of the fates bit from Solo doesn’t fit well in a fight scene, IMO. The Naboo star destroyer shot at the end of the movie is a slightly different aspect ratio than the rest of the film. Those are the only critiques I have, everything else you’ve done is great.